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In this week's video, the Docs dive into Movmi, an animation automation company that aims is to simplify and expedite the animation process for animators and game developers.

Video here 👇

The patient

Movmi (website)

What they do

Movmi is a complimentary motion capture solution that caters to a diverse range of lifestyle locations and a variety of camera devices. Movmi offers many benefits including:

• Eliminating the need for laborious hours spent on animating a single character.
• Utilizing advanced computer vision algorithms to handle diverse humanoid scenarios capable of capturing facial and body movements of any individual
• Delivering more innovative solutions that make animation more accessible and intuitive

Show Notes

• The Docs take a bit of a fresh approach to deliver you their #1 tip to improve your pitch deck. It's a tip that may be obvious to many of you, but so many people get it wrong.
• The tip is ... use narrative headlines for your slides! Many people title their slides "The Problem" or "The Solution" then explain said Problem and Solution with slide content. This puts the onus on an investor to figure out your ideas for themselves.
• The Docs show you why narrative headlines are important and how you can write them yourselves.
• They also show you a real-life example of how they introduced simple narrative headlines for Movmi, the aforementioned animation automation company.

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